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tonybhachu
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« on: August 05, 2008, 06:33:11 PM »

Hi All,

Here's one of my new sites that I've been working on for the last month.

=> http://www.managecreditcarddebt.info

Please let me know what you think and as always, I'd appreciate your suggestions / feedback on improving it.

Many thanks,

Tony

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« Reply #1 on: August 05, 2008, 07:46:14 PM »



wow... thats a lot of ads!

the image in the top left looks a bit blurry.. maybe u could find a higher quality version?
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« Reply #2 on: August 05, 2008, 08:10:03 PM »

Hi Edward,
I'm having a new header created for the site so thanks for picking up on that.
What about the SEO?
Cheers,
Tony
PS. The ads pay the rent Wink
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« Reply #3 on: August 05, 2008, 08:47:23 PM »

Tony do you write the web copy yourself? Nothing wrong with it, I'm just being nosey and having used a few "copy?" writers recently yours reads better than most.

Firstly I can see that site picking up a lot of longtails relatively quickly!

Linking, Titles and Content all great; I won't even bother running a bit of keyword research on the niche as I can tell you've got that base covered already...


The only things I would try and change are some of your <h1> tags and maybe add some <h2/3's> as bolded lead-in titles to some of the paragraphs?...

Homepage is fine....
Code:
<h1 align="center">
                                  <font size="3"><span style=
                                  "FONT-SIZE: 16pt"><br>

                            Manage Credit Card
                            Debt</span></font></h1>

But I see it the same on all pages:

For example this page http://www.managecreditcarddebt.info/Credit_Card_Debt_Relief.html I would put the website name something like so (depending on styles):
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<p align="center">
                                  <font size="3"><span style=
                                  "FONT-SIZE: 16pt"><strong><br>

                            Manage Credit Card
                            Debt</strong></span></font></p>

And take the page title Credit Card Debt Relief
Code:
<p><strong><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt">Credit Card
Debt&nbsp;Relief</span></strong></p>

and change it to
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<p><h1><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt">Credit Card
Debt&nbsp;Relief</span></h1></p>


That's the only on-site points I can really find. I think you'll know what I mean above.
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« Reply #4 on: August 05, 2008, 09:05:08 PM »

Hi Dan,
Appreciate your feedback.

Point taken regarding the use of H1 & H2 tags for the sub-pages.

RE: Content - I tend to write my own articles for most of my sites, and on the few occassions that I have purchased articles for my websites, I ended up re-writing them anyway.

Many thanks,
Tony
 
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« Reply #5 on: August 06, 2008, 08:12:41 PM »

Hi,
I've added a new header (looks much better) and added H1 tags for the headings.
Thanks,
Tony
 
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« Reply #6 on: August 08, 2008, 04:07:27 AM »

The header looks fine, I didn't see the other, but this one is good.

I didn't see any ads and I didn't see any pictures either. Isn't there a rule that says there has to be pictures mixed in with articles?


Oh, there needs to be a return between paragraphs 7 & 8 on the 'How to manage Credit Card Debt' article.

Nice work tony!
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« Reply #7 on: August 08, 2008, 10:23:21 AM »

Hi Clicken,
Thanks for the feedback Smiley
I'll ammend the article later tonight and add another return between the paras 7 & 8.
Kind regards,
Tony

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« Reply #8 on: August 18, 2008, 12:04:03 AM »

Nice site, and it looks like it is setup to generate some nice profits. Are you struggling with traffic? Statistically, it appears so. It also appears to me through statistical research that your site is lacking quality ratings as well. I would work on this and you should start to see a steady flow of traffic and conversions.  Wink
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« Reply #9 on: August 18, 2008, 01:38:28 PM »

Thanks Statman - I'm working on it.
Cheers,
Tony
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« Reply #10 on: August 19, 2008, 12:16:28 PM »

Right i'm going to be a bit harsh because in the long-run my tips should help Smiley

First of all, you are using some horrible microsoft application to make the site. The reason you should never use it is because the code is bloated with microsoft non-standards compliant crappy html styling. So your site may break in the future when the code is no longer supported and it will make the filesize of the pages larger which will make them take longer to load.

http://validator.w3.org/check?verbose=1&uri=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.managecreditcarddebt.info%2F - fix these issues!

CSS styles should all be stored in an external style sheet and referenced to using a class when they are required in the document. See my tutorial on CSS to get an idea how it works (on munkyonline.co.uk)

What is this code doing?:
Code:
<blockquote dir="ltr"
            style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px">
    <blockquote dir="ltr"
                style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px">
        <blockquote dir="ltr"
                    style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px">
            <blockquote dir="ltr"
                        style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px">
                <blockquote dir="ltr"
                            style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px">
                    <blockquote dir="ltr"
                                style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px">
                        <blockquote dir="ltr"
                                    style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px">
                            <h1 align="center">
                                  <font size="3"><span style=
                                  "FONT-SIZE: 16pt"><br>

                                  </span></font></h1>
                        </blockquote>
                    </blockquote>
                </blockquote>
            </blockquote>
        </blockquote>
    </blockquote>
</blockquote></td>

You'll probably want to delete all of that out! There's an h1 tag in that lot that isnt needed either.

SEO-wise the page is pretty good. Run the page through our seo tool - you got some good scores there. Would be nice to see them all 100% though Smiley  Not sure if you've overdone the 'credit card's in the anchors on the left.

Also in the footer you have <?=date("Y");?> which wont work unless your server is parsing your html pages as php. The page will need a .php extension for the date to show correctly Smiley

Javascript, like with CSS, should be stored externally too. So all the code at the bottom of the page put it in an external js file and then link to it.
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« Reply #11 on: August 19, 2008, 01:06:01 PM »

Hi Munky,
Many thanks for your excellent critique - it's exactly the sort of thing I was looking for to improve the site.
I use a XSitePro template for most of my content sites and I guess that's where some of this code originates from.
I'll try and implement CSS stylesheets and store the Javascript code externally in future.
Thanks,
Tony
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« Reply #12 on: August 19, 2008, 01:18:53 PM »

No problem! If you ever need and help with coding then just send me a PM and i'll help you out. Same goes with all the members Smiley
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« Reply #13 on: August 20, 2008, 10:10:14 PM »

Hello Tony,

Hope you are doing Great.

             I found that your Website Seems to be very Good in Designing as well  as the information mentioned.But I found that Traffic is very low and there is no Page Rank,so increase the traffic and page rank so that your website will be known to everyone.Hope you can do this by (egbsystems.com/search_engine_optimization_services.html)SEO Services and this was my Suggestion to you.

Regards,
Egbsystems

Hi All,

Here's one of my new sites that I've been working on for the last month.

=> http://www.managecreditcarddebt.info

Please let me know what you think and as always, I'd appreciate your suggestions / feedback on improving it.

Many thanks,

Tony


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« Reply #14 on: August 21, 2008, 12:13:17 AM »

But I found that Traffic is very low and there is no Page Rank,so increase the traffic and page rank so that your website will be known to everyone.

I suppose "egbsystems123", it pays to read the post!  See below.

Here's one of my new sites that I've been working on for the last month.

This is a new site that Tony has just made, hence low traffic.

As for Toolbar Pagerank: if you're into SEO you'll know that TBPR means sod all really.

I'd appreciate your suggestions / feedback on improving it.

You've provided no real input into the site of Tony's, and it just seems (at this early stage) you're posting for the sake of it with keywords related to your signature link. I've already deleted one post of yours and taken the anchor text link out of your spam post.

Keep it up because I've got nothing better to do than ban "one-liners" who don't contribute to the community.

Infact I've just searched your username and found nothing but "one-liners" and blatant self promotion wherever you've joined, with no real contributions...

User banned.

(and yes, I'm in mini-hitler mode at the moment)  Grin
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